16.12.16

Winter Dust

Winter dust in my eyes,
don’t know how time flies.

A few winters ago,
you were here,
so near.
I could smell the fragrance,
of your hair.

You left your footprints,
on my heart,
frozen in snow,
they refuse to depart.

I wait for the spring,
to see your smile,
a long journey of time,
has to take this heart of mine.

Winter dust in my eyes,
don’t know how time flies.

15 comments:

  1. Winter dust in my eyes,
    don’t know how time flies.

    Irrespective of the time factor it is worth the wait, Vandana!

    Hank

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  2. Vandana... this is so beautiful... it makes me think of the Christmas I spent with 'him' such sweet and sad memories together xox

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  3. beautiful lines Vandana...happy new year

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  4. Happy New Year Vandana... I wish you lots of joy and love this year and onward xox

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  6. hi!

    loved this b'ful poem abt longing :)

    are you on FB?

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  7. ah, the longing in this poem grabs at my heart

    much love...

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  8. You left your footprints,
    on my heart,
    frozen in snow,
    they refuse to depart.

    Beautifully evocative!❤️

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  9. It is hard to be separated from the one we love for so long.

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  10. Winter dust ..lovely image..

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  11. Beautiful love poem, Vandana.

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  12. A lovely poem of wistful longing.....the footprints in the heart resonate wth me. In my case, they are paws. Smiles.

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  13. What a lovely refrain:
    'Winter dust in my eyes,
    don’t know how time flies'.

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  14. We are always chasing time. Separated from someone you love is such a tough winter.

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Thank you for flying by. I appreciate your honest and critical comments.